The tail in this one really adds to the scene, and I could definitely see a dancer using that to her best advantage. The thumb on the pole looks a little like an outtie belly button and that is a little distracting. I am not sure how you would fix that, but that is the most awkward part of the scene to me.
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As for the thumb, I could move her hand, or just reposition the thumb so it is not quite as visible. I'll keep it mind for the next time.