Render a Day

[lionkingcmsl]

Observation deck by ~LionkingCMSL on deviantART

I want suggestions on what is missing in this scene. I feel that that it lacking something. but I have no idea what. Note that there wouldn't be too much clutter in this type of scene.

Comments are really appreciated.

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Note that this is the scene I was talking about in my previous post.

Comments

[shockwave77598.livejournal.com]

it lacks;

darkness. The space views are too small and unobvious.

Shadows under the people and things.

bar lighting. No bar has the lights you show up top.

Plants.

A waitress carrying a drink behind the running guy, staring at him and trying to save the drink from falling.

Tables.

a sign with the name of the lounge where the blue wall is.

uniform on the "cop"

subdued floor - the red makes my eyes hurt.

[lowen-kind.livejournal.com]

Noted, but you need to get your eyes checked. That running guy is a gal, and that is her uniform.

[nekura-ca.livejournal.com]

I think the floor really needs more texture. Even just something subtle to break up the flatness. Most public places have patterned carpet or tile type flooring.

[aj-hyena.livejournal.com]

A weapons locker in the background looking ransacked, as if someone looted it.

Maybe some dropped "training weapons" on the ground (blunted sticks or something, for melee training).

[smrgol-t-kirin.livejournal.com]

floor texture, more "detail clutter", plants, something on the walls, lighter wall color - that blue is too bold. The top half of the walls is too dark.

Nekura_ca has it right - patterned flooring helps define the space (and hides dirt). A solid red floor would not work well.

The security uniforms do not stand out or match.
The fur on the left looks like she's out for an exercise jog.