Render a Day

[lionkingcmsl]

Concourse redux by *LionkingCMSL on deviantART

Here is the Concourse scene with 8 added people and some corrections and additions.

There are 20 people and 34 lights.

For the record here are the people used: Biz Male (P4), Biz Female (P4), Posette (P4), Poser Male (P4), Don (P5), Judy (P5), Jessie Casual x2 (P6), James Casual (P6), James Hi-Rez, (P6), Simon x2 (P7), Sydney x2 (P7), Ryan Casual (P8), Alyson (P8), Alisha (P8), Tomo Low-Rez (P8), Victoria 4, and Micheal 4.

I would've used Poser Pro 2012 figures, but I don't have clothing for them.

Poser 8 and Poser Pro 2012

Comments

Great pic!

[blacktigr.livejournal.com]

Still looks good, but I have a couple constructive comments for your next one. The left hand side has 3 figures that are all on the same foot in a triangle formation like in pop music videos. The lines of the floor lead right to them (which is good, in art), and each is separately on one of the lines. If this is a casual formation, you might want to stagger them a little more to make it look less deliberate. The arch over the middle figure in the ceiling accentuates the whole thing.

I like the fact that you have figures overlapping others even when they are not in the same scenario together. I like the fact that you have a pretty good tableau working here, with debris in foreground, middle and background. I like the fact that you have pops of color going across the whole picture, from the background with the gal in the turquoise to the woman in yellow on the right.

I like the fact that your figures are doing all sorts of different things, from walking to arguing to squatting and finally running. (Though I would probably put the runners farther apart if the grouping is to seem haphazard.)

I think that if you can figure out how to put someone in the extreme foreground without blocking the camera, you'll have very few comments from me in the future. ;)

[blacktigr.livejournal.com]

One more thing! Looking at the pic, I see that no one is looking at one another except the two couples. This is pretty rare in humans (and other animals), and perhaps someone who people-watches would be a good addition to your next effort.