Dover - redux

[lionkingcmsl]

Someone on the suburban_jungle community said that Dover looked a bit feminine. :=/

Well, I could see why, especially as I used women's slacks instead of men's slacks.

Well, I changed them and broadened the Tobi model's shoulders, plus some other tweaks and came up with this version:



I think he looks more male here than in the first render.

Comments

[makovette.livejournal.com]

Two comments perhaps if I may...

His head is too small for his torso now I think - it looks bolted on... The belt line on his slacks are too high too, maybe drop that an inch or two.

This stuff is a lot harder than it it looks, thanks for all the render-fu :)

CYa!
Mako

[makovette.livejournal.com]

Oh, PS:

Are you still on dial up or has broadband made it out to your place? Be nice to Skype with you some weekend just to catch up. Calls are tough, as I'm working Stoopid Hours..

CYa!
Mako

[lowen-kind.livejournal.com]

Still on dial up.

I could get broadband if I wanted to spend the money/switch ISPs, which I do not. :=/

I'm normally up to about 1a local (10p your time).

[avenginglioness.livejournal.com]

I agree with makovette's assesment, and I have my own nitpickiness to add... I hope you don't feel insulted, i think you do a great job! I certainly wouldn't be able to do any of this.

For a cheetah, I think you need him to be a bit more slender in the belly and hips, then extend the tail down much further, maybe to mid calf, and then make sure it curls a bit back and the tip is a bit fuller than the rest of the tail. Cheetahs have such long tails to act like a rudder when they go chasing after those tasty antelopes. :)